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8/20/11 9:12:55 PM#21
These comics arent amazing but I definitely think they are going in the right direction. I hope the author will take heed from the positive comments here and keep trying. They are slowly getting better over time. :)
Best wishes Twistingfate |
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8/21/11 1:44:40 AM#22
Yup. Still not funny. |
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8/21/11 2:13:13 AM#23
I want MOAR! |
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ImNotAGaymer
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Joined: 12/07/09
What to know and not to see is not to know and see that you knew what you saw. |
8/21/11 6:00:57 PM#24
This one was funny. I can relate (although not THAT passionately) to the obsession with art books in collector's editions. We like to play MMOs because real people aren't as interesting, real exercise and fighting hurts, and virtual females are attractive. |
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8/24/11 10:49:27 AM#25
To be honest, those who bash his work are just jealous... Make your own comics then submit them. Maybe he finds all of your comments funny, and makes them "bad" as you say, just to read your posts. Anyhow, keep up the comics David, some of us enjoy a little nerdy / geeky humor! :D |
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8/25/11 6:19:40 PM#26
I didn't think it was that bad. "Or at least some real porn" was a reasonable finishing joke. |
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8/25/11 6:28:22 PM#27
This place is becoming more like 'youtube comments' everyday
Comic was humorous ----- |
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8/25/11 6:42:00 PM#28
I made some (only 5) humurous comics myself and the biggest problem I faced was the flow of the story/events and then ending with the joke (punchline). Should I add another frame, more text, etc. Me being a perfectionist made the problem to big.
Here you have a lot of text in the first three frames which makes it flow slowly. Then all of a sudden the fourth frame has very little text and then the last frame with the joke comes. In my opinion the fourth frame should have more text (I also found the reason he leaving the room to weak) to keep the flow steady and BAM the punchline comes.
I have no idea if this made any sense to anyone else. |
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8/25/11 6:48:53 PM#29
Additional: Instead of adding text to the fourth frame remove text from the first three. The joke is not THAT good. It's like Garfield jokes are not that good but you can read them fast and then you go: Oh that Garfield, what a character. If you have to read a lot to get to the joke with Garfield you would (perhaps unconsciously) go: damn did I read all that for such a lame joke? |
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