So, I talked before about the torture and killing of the words "loose" and "lose"...
So now, three other things I noticed:
1) If you are making a super powerful robot/mage/warrior type guy and he falls, please stop making them do that knee where they fall onto one knee and then slowly look up, all powerful like. If you don't know what I'm talkin about, watch any one of those silly game-makin' schools commercials.
2) Also, if the above mentioned comes from a super powerful setting, and you are talking bout it, or advertising it, don't put "in a place beyond imagination" or make one of your characters EVER say: "..you have NO idea how powerful I am.." or "... do you have ANY idea the scope of the situation?" . In other words, I know how powerful your guy is, and how dire the situation is. And no, it's not "..beyond fathoming."
3) And lastly, PLEASE stop ripping off the ole' idea of space marines in big armor and design straight from H.R. Giger. How many more games are going to have an "alien" race and a "earth" race and some powerful "elf" race that does magicy stuff?
I hope these make sense. If not, oh well. See ya in game!